Haiku: Shell

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About Edmark M. Law

My name Edmark M. Law. I work as a freelance writer, mainly writing about science and mathematics. I am an ardent hobbyist. I like to read, solve puzzles, play chess, make origami and play basketball. In addition, I dabble in magic, particularly card magic and other sleight-of-hand type magic. I live in Hong Kong. I blog at learnfunfacts.com. You can find me on Twitter @EdmarkLaw and Facebook. My email is edmarklaw@learnfunfacts.com
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27 Responses to Haiku: Shell

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  2. Lovely, well captured!

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  3. rishhu says:

    This was good!

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  5. Noel Hartem says:

    sweet. I was always told they were the wishes of mermaids in hopes of finding a sailor for a lover.

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  6. vsweta says:

    Beautiful poem and very well presented! Did you click that picture too?

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  7. delphini510 says:

    Beautiful poem and lovely setting. I wonder whether we also listen and remember.
    The sound to the sea.
    Miriam

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  8. B. says:

    All I love is in there: the sea, the thinking and the feeling… 🙂

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  9. Peter Klopp says:

    Wow! I love this haiku on the seashell. Great poem!

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  10. I like the little poem, but I do not think it is a haiku, by the strict definition. Haiku have 17 syllables in three lines with; 5, 7, 5 syllables (top to bottom). This poem has: 5, 8, 6. To scrunch the last line into 5 syllables, you could write it this way: “To the list’ning ear.” You could rephrase the second line to fit 7 syllables this way: “It’s life at sea and murmurs.” You could rephrase the last line, for 5 syllables, more drastically as: “To receptive ears.”

    The shell remembers
    It’s life at sea and murmurs
    To receptive ears.

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  11. Garfield Hug says:

    This is a good one Edmark! I like this one 🙂

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